Download: Stay.mp3 (2593 kB)

Please record a cover version of this song if you can!

Lyrics

The rules are simple,
Good enough for me,
"Just do your best,
And trust in what may be..."

It's all so easy,
Doing all my best,
It's all so easy,
So why do I feel unrest?

Let's turn the lights down,
Let's go to bed.
It's all so easy,
Easier done than said.

She came so easy,
And she loves me so,
She came so easy,
But where's she gonna go?

Please stay, stay with me!
Please stay!

My Lady Sunshine,
You're all I need,
You make me happy
Like no one ever did!

You make me happy
In every possible way,
You make me happy,
Just please be here to stay!

Please stay, stay with me!
Please stay!

Reviews

These are some of the reviews I received on GarageBand site before it was shut down.

Guitar
The guitar would be more strong. The lead vocal is a little out of the music. The song has a beautiful melody. I think tha some backing vocal will go well. The lyrics is good.
- pvieiraneto from Brazil on 11Mar2010

i wish
i wish i coud hook you up with a good recording studio cause you have potentisal lots of it to
- grimtones from North Smithfield, Rhode Island on 14Feb2010

A Good Start
The song is good but the production is really hurting it. I'm hearing a high level of hiss and a guitar that's pretty thin. The vocal is pretty good but there are a few pieces that need a little more fire and passion. I think another go at the recording process could really help. I can even hear this as an excellent rock track if you could get a band behind it. It's a good song that needs some technical help.
- Beaverbuilt1 from Bracebridge, Ontario, Canada on 8Dec2009

Lo-fi
This melody is simple but quite effective. I like it!
Vocals are ok, the singer has a nice voice, but could be varied a bit more.
Good chorus!
This is of course a lo-fi production but I think I can hear that´s there´s something worth working with here!
- peppyvoice from Stockholm, Sweden on 20Sep2009

review
Like the phono intro....nice effect..blues sound.

The vocals are good....quiet, so it draws the listener in, again, nice job.

Add some drums!! You need some drums to fill this one out. Also some bass. At the 1:30 mark, I am still waiting for the "hit"...you need to just rock it at the "please stay" part...drums, bass, guitar....man, that would make this song ROCK!

Ok, good job...this one is a good one!
- ss7atm from None, Arkansas on 7Sep2009

Do it again......
There is a nice song hiding behind the unfortunate poor production and poor arrangement. It has nice verses and a catchy chorus. Invest in yourself and record this song again.
- petro275 from West Bridgewater, Massachusetts on 7Sep2009

soulfull vibe
Expressive and moody. I like the way I could feel the passion you obviously put into your music. I really think a bit more head room in the recording of the guitar would add a more energy to the song. Not knowing what prduction methods were used I can't suggest ways to achieve this. Simply adding a bass track would help support the beat and would help blend vocals and the guitar. Lyrics were creative and kept my attention.
- rockinrola from E Town, Kentucky on 31Aug2009